Friday, September 28, 2012

New Cause Essay Intro 1

I have learned in life that I need friends to get me through the good...and the bad times. I have those friends. Life has taught me that even if you aren't blood related you care just as much for them as you do your own family. There are those people that come and and go in my life, that I have thought, 'wow I thought I meant more to them.' I have seen so many things, and have grown with the new friends in my life. There are reasons why I love the best friends I have in my life, three specific reasons that go to my three best friends. Trust, Caring,  and Compassion.

1 comment:

  1. The plan works okay, but the setup is weak; it needs a story or an example to hook the reader.

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